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You've got too much going on here. As requested, I have attached the first X pages of the manuscript. We all hope for sales to as wide an audience as possible, but how a book is marketed and publicized has a whole lot more to do with the audience it Does this actually make sense when you see it written down like this? (no, it doesn't) Here's where you need to step outside your writerly self, and read with an objective Check This Out

Generally objects hurtle, you don't hurtle the object. Thank you for your time and consideration. Do not EVER write your query in the voice of your character. Do it well, and do it on purpose.

Contradictory confuses me. In a twist of events, Arthur was not the one to take the Sword from the Stone, his sister Guinevere was. After spotting Mira witnessing a shakedown gone awry, these gang members give her chase making Mira run to the first place that comes to her mind - Tom's bar. Their homes won't burn if Æled retaliates.

Call the cops! Make no mistake about it - Aster might be serving in Bill Clinton's Navy but he's damn sure no believer in America. Their families won't suffer. Think about it: if someone asked you what your book is about, would you tell them what you wrote in this first paragraph?

Close this window and log in. So far as he's concerned, you can be the best damn crane operator in the Navy but you aren't much of a man if you've got to take it out every INSTANT NO. Aster fucking hates cowboys.

I can test on A2003 if you'd like. It entices me to read more. Given the next paragraph, it seems like there IS ambiguity already! I really hope you're writing about something more than a guy's sex life cause I'm just not interested in that and I'm having a hard time thinking of anyone else who

Both the query and the resulting table remove the

They only fear Æled's control of fire--but not for much longer. You can not write a sentence that requires an agent to re-read it to understand what's going on. Registration on or use of this site constitutes acceptance of our Privacy Policy. I have had 8 professional query critiques.

And "they find equal parts etc" doesn't seem to have much to do with what follows. They force icy metal into her mouth and onto her temples that burns her flesh and jolts her into flame-colored terror? Why would a bank need to accept deposits from private clients if it can just borrow from the Federal Reserve? Captain Jack Sparrow wrote: I have a column in a table named "Hospice".

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I'd love to take it higher, but several agents said 120k+ is a hard sell.

I'm glad they happened, but I don't care. For the next twelve months, we see Mira constantly trying (and mostly failing) to write while having a series of misadventures. Even with all her experience in the workings of the human mind, the search for the truth might drag her into a labyrinth of lies she can't escape. It's a picture book.

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